Wednesday, 8 August 2018
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next time please speak up a little #loved the speech told me so much
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Greta, My name is Julia and I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School. The interesting part was seeing how you connected your favourite animal to your favourite colour - yellow to the sun which makes grass grow and calf's eat grass, I thought that connection was great! You brought me back to when in spring you can just smell hay and you just think 'oh, spring is coming'. To improve this maybe you could put why netball is your favourite sport but other than that spectacular post.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Kia Ora Greta.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 6 at YMS Rimu. Your blog post was fabulas , it was amazing and very well written, but you could maybe add in more descriptive words. This reminded me I made an all about me. Maybe next time you could create your own calf using google lines and shapes. Why do you like calves? what are you dislikes? mine are veggies. Who are your best friends? Kind Regards Maddison from Rimu. :)
Kia Ora Greta,
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry to say that a few of your blog posts can't be seen.
I hope you can fix the problem.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School